I think the paper needs more work. The writing is not really inviting, it feels a bit heavy - and not by relying on difficult vocabulary, but by simply having a slightly immature feel to it. In addition, it seems the reasoning sometimes omits important steps.
A Paper I Wrote On Christianity For College
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Posted 04 January 2013 - 07:59 PM
I think the paper needs more work. The writing is not really inviting, it feels a bit heavy - and not by relying on difficult vocabulary, but by simply having a slightly immature feel to it. In addition, it seems the reasoning sometimes omits important steps.
This was posted in 2010. Valk is not on the forum anymore.
"He believed to the end exactly the same things he started with. It seems to me that a man who can think straight along for forty-seven years without changing a single idea ought to be kept in a cabinet as a curiosity."- Jean Webster
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Posted 05 January 2013 - 03:39 PM
Oh, I only looked at the dating of the most recent previous post, which was early december last year. Sorry for inconvenient thread-necromancy.
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