Deidre Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 I wrote this for a friend whose boyfriend died in a car accident, two years ago. She was wrestling with her faith at the time... and this was my way of seeing her pain, through her eyes.This DanceFalling in the darkStumblingUnable to catch my balanceSwaying to the distant melodiesWe drip with anticipationHungry, but unfedThis wild rideThat winds aroundUp and downColorful like a carnivalMy head spinsPromises in the windThat never come trueYour mouth meets mineFrozen, I do nothingThis danceThis romanceTell me it will never endTell me I’m not dreamingThen, my world explodesYou are goneOnly fragments of you exist in my headThis danceThis romanceVanishes…Without a traceWere you here at all?He is in a better placeHeaven awaitsSay a prayerTake careAnd, The One will be sure to hear your despairThis ache, this sufferingIt would be better to have never met youNever loved youThis danceThis romanceSifting through my hands, like a summer rainAh, but the heart never lets goIt winds around and holds tightTo even the mundane of all we sharedIt won’t let me forgetThis danceThis romanceThis lifeThis painThis sufferingThis voidThis… breakable heart o’mineTell God…I miss you. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deva Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 Its good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦ Fuego ♦ Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 Well said. Even the phrasing echoes the jumble of emotions that are love and loss. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator TrueFreedom Posted October 29, 2014 Moderator Share Posted October 29, 2014 <3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted October 29, 2014 Author Share Posted October 29, 2014 Thank you! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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