Guest Dreamer Posted June 9, 2005 Share Posted June 9, 2005 Hi all! Here's a song I wrote recently that I think goes well with the theme of this site. I write songs and poems all the time, it's very therapeutic for me when I'm down, and I'll post other ones up here soon. Hope you like this one and tell me what you think. Don't forget constructive criticism on how I can change it and if it doesn't make sense somewhere! Thanks! "Open Your Eyes" I wandered past a shining star Wondering how and what you are Nature's beauty and the radiance And in the sky do a graceful dance I used to be blinded even in the dark I couldn't even listen to the song of the meadowlark I sat in a rut as people told me what to believe And then I realized the potential that I can achieve (hook) I've got so much ground left to cover The secrets of the universe just waiting to be discovered (chorus) Open your eyes And take my hand Learn to see the world through different sights Open your heart And let your soul emerge Try to decipher the meanings of life Keep around your spirituality But learn to uncover reality I've unearthed that knowledge is power Ignorance isn't always bliss, it can become a wilted flower I've always longed to fight the good fight Existence, though it may seem, isn't always trite (hook) (chorus) Philosophy and psychology Evolutionary theory Biology, chemistry and the laws of physics Understand the wisdom of the mystics The keys to unravel the secrets of the stars (chorus 2x) Open your eyes (Open your eyes) Open your eyes (Open your eyes) And observe life for all that it really is Hope you liked it! Discover a theme, I don't know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fweethawt Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 I liked it. It's cool. Of course, with it being a song and all, it would be much better to hear it put to music. Other than that, it's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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