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I Don't Care About Christianity


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I don’t care about Christianity.

 

I don’t care about it’s hypocrisy and inconsistency.

I don’t care about it’s silliness and anthropomorphic deity.

I don’t care about it’s waning power and desperate graspings.

I don’t care about it’s preachers and their constant raspings.

I don’t care about it’s prophets or their raging ego.

I don’t care about it’s parishioners or the tantrums they throw.

I don’t care about it’s claims to understanding and wisdom.

I don’t care about it’s desire for dominance and dominion.

I don’t care about Christianity or it’s prying nose,

Just as I don’t care about my childhood clothes.

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I don’t care about Christianity.

 

I don’t care about it’s hypocrisy and inconsistency.

I don’t care about it’s silliness and anthropomorphic deity.

I don’t care about it’s waning power and desperate graspings.

I don’t care about it’s preachers and their constant raspings.

I don’t care about it’s prophets or their raging ego.

I don’t care about it’s parishioners or the tantrums they throw.

I don’t care about it’s claims to understanding and wisdom.

I don’t care about it’s desire for dominance and dominion.

I don’t care about Christianity or it’s prying nose,

Just as I don’t care about my childhood clothes.

 

Sing it Brother!!! Oh and a personal hangup of mine - it's means it is, use its in all other circumstances. Still rockin' poetry though.

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I cared too much about Christianity.

 

I cared too much about it's prying eyes

when I told them that Jesus lied,

they yelled and cried.

 

I cared too much about it's negative influence

watching feigned innocence,

it made me flinch.

 

I cared too much about it's terrible past

how they forgot it so fast,

saying that history didn't last.

 

I cared too much about it's legacy

so much that I couldn't see,

that it's just the way of humanity.

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Good work legion regalis :) A good way to rant in my opinion; I liked the way that you ended it. Poetry is one of my favorite past times, reading and writing...so I had to write my own, it's like a compulsion sometimes.

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Thanks for the kudos Lerato. :thanks: I'll try to remember the grammatical rule for it's/its. It's one of the few that I perpetually have a problem with. I mean when I speak of Rome for instance I want so say "It's empire was vast", rather than "Its empire was vast." I'm thinking of possession I guess. Oh, and welcome to the forums.

 

Thank you for the kudos too Kirangel. :thanks: I liked your poetic reply. Very nice. I didn't intend to go the poetic route. I just wanted to give a nice prosaic rant about how I don't care about Christianity and after the first couple of sentences I realized that there was poetic potetial for it. It felt kind of good. I think I'll keep the door open for more poetic rants in the future. :woohoo:

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Thanks for the kudos Lerato. :thanks: I'll try to remember the grammatical rule for it's/its. It's one of the few that I perpetually have a problem with. I mean when I speak of Rome for instance I want so say "It's empire was vast", rather than "Its empire was vast." I'm thinking of possession I guess. Oh, and welcome to the forums.

 

Thank you for the kudos too Kirangel. :thanks: I liked your poetic reply. Very nice. I didn't intend to go the poetic route. I just wanted to give a nice prosaic rant about how I don't care about Christianity and after the first couple of sentences I realized that there was poetic potetial for it. It felt kind of good. I think I'll keep the door open for more poetic rants in the future. :woohoo:

 

 

Not a big deal. It just looked funny to my eye for a second before I realized why. Please feel free to do more poetic ranting in the future. I find it's a good way to let out pent up emotions.

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