Legion Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 I don’t care about Christianity. I don’t care about it’s hypocrisy and inconsistency. I don’t care about it’s silliness and anthropomorphic deity. I don’t care about it’s waning power and desperate graspings. I don’t care about it’s preachers and their constant raspings. I don’t care about it’s prophets or their raging ego. I don’t care about it’s parishioners or the tantrums they throw. I don’t care about it’s claims to understanding and wisdom. I don’t care about it’s desire for dominance and dominion. I don’t care about Christianity or it’s prying nose, Just as I don’t care about my childhood clothes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerato Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 I don’t care about Christianity. I don’t care about it’s hypocrisy and inconsistency. I don’t care about it’s silliness and anthropomorphic deity. I don’t care about it’s waning power and desperate graspings. I don’t care about it’s preachers and their constant raspings. I don’t care about it’s prophets or their raging ego. I don’t care about it’s parishioners or the tantrums they throw. I don’t care about it’s claims to understanding and wisdom. I don’t care about it’s desire for dominance and dominion. I don’t care about Christianity or it’s prying nose, Just as I don’t care about my childhood clothes. Sing it Brother!!! Oh and a personal hangup of mine - it's means it is, use its in all other circumstances. Still rockin' poetry though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirangel Posted July 6, 2007 Share Posted July 6, 2007 I cared too much about Christianity. I cared too much about it's prying eyes when I told them that Jesus lied, they yelled and cried. I cared too much about it's negative influence watching feigned innocence, it made me flinch. I cared too much about it's terrible past how they forgot it so fast, saying that history didn't last. I cared too much about it's legacy so much that I couldn't see, that it's just the way of humanity. =============================== Good work legion regalis A good way to rant in my opinion; I liked the way that you ended it. Poetry is one of my favorite past times, reading and writing...so I had to write my own, it's like a compulsion sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legion Posted July 7, 2007 Author Share Posted July 7, 2007 Thanks for the kudos Lerato. I'll try to remember the grammatical rule for it's/its. It's one of the few that I perpetually have a problem with. I mean when I speak of Rome for instance I want so say "It's empire was vast", rather than "Its empire was vast." I'm thinking of possession I guess. Oh, and welcome to the forums. Thank you for the kudos too Kirangel. I liked your poetic reply. Very nice. I didn't intend to go the poetic route. I just wanted to give a nice prosaic rant about how I don't care about Christianity and after the first couple of sentences I realized that there was poetic potetial for it. It felt kind of good. I think I'll keep the door open for more poetic rants in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerato Posted July 7, 2007 Share Posted July 7, 2007 Thanks for the kudos Lerato. I'll try to remember the grammatical rule for it's/its. It's one of the few that I perpetually have a problem with. I mean when I speak of Rome for instance I want so say "It's empire was vast", rather than "Its empire was vast." I'm thinking of possession I guess. Oh, and welcome to the forums. Thank you for the kudos too Kirangel. I liked your poetic reply. Very nice. I didn't intend to go the poetic route. I just wanted to give a nice prosaic rant about how I don't care about Christianity and after the first couple of sentences I realized that there was poetic potetial for it. It felt kind of good. I think I'll keep the door open for more poetic rants in the future. Not a big deal. It just looked funny to my eye for a second before I realized why. Please feel free to do more poetic ranting in the future. I find it's a good way to let out pent up emotions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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