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Goodbye Jesus

"tiresome" Poem


Telesmith

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This is a poem I wrote while coming to find the answers in apologetics just down right obnoxious.

 

Tiresome

 

Cosmological, ontological needing much convincing.

Passing questions, returned as platitudes not much worth advancing. Hearing

The thousandth time, hearing again the first. I must be poorly designed

Requiring clarification on what others unveil so easy. No! Sloppy answers

At the time we didn’t have better. Now willful disobedience to the mind

Made by the creator. Made by the creator. Made by the creator? Maybe

The God grew up with us in the fold of space and time

And found it better in later years to stroke his ego elsewhere.

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  • 3 weeks later...

Well stated....and what an apt title....

 

These lines caused me a chuckle:

The thousandth time, hearing again the first. I must be poorly designed

Requiring clarification on what others unveil so easy.

 

cheers,

~carol

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