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I Wrote This Poem Today


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Disappointment

 

I have read it now several times

More than one of them in this house

And what, what part is true

Why must it all be so false

For me to end up so disappointed

It’s losing a best friend

For the sake of sanity really

But sane it is in the end.

 

There is not way on this earth

More than once I have concluded

And how, how can this be now

Why did this have to happen

For me to end up with this despair

And I was afraid of this

For the times I said goodbye

But goodbye was what I said.

 

Ought I to be so very lonely

More than once I ran away there

And where, where was reasonability

Why did I make some choices

For me to end up a comparison

And I did not even care

For the ways I was insane

But insane was what I was.

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Welcome, desiree.

 

Nicely written. I can see my own experience in those words as well.

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I was actually thinking about you on this poem too Graphics.. I just read your other thread. I'm sorry.

 

Great poem!

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Great poem. Welcome by the way.

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Thank you, outstanding poem!

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Thank you, outstanding poem!

Ha ha love that post, with the avvy. Don't change the avvy. It accentuates everything you post he he.

 

Yeah I liked the poem too. So many people going along with insanity, and it's the sane that get victimized.

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Thank you, outstanding poem!

Ha ha love that post, with the avvy. Don't change the avvy. It accentuates everything you post he he.

 

Yeah I liked the poem too. So many people going along with insanity, and it's the sane that get victimized.

 

That's me, with the subtlety of a sledgehammer. :grin:

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