MiggyEvans Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 So, this is an impromptu poem I've written. Its expressing the struggle of embracing a new point of view. Leaving faith behind in favor of reason, but finding that the debate itself is more satisfying than the conclusion. Like it's more stimulating to question than to decide. Waves that fight to slide down the shore A lone man caught in the high tide and undertow Sloshing, treading, finding no footing Nothing but water. No firmness, no rock. A mind like weary arms, arriving at nothing Hope just ahead, but never any closer. Happiness now, before and after Nothing but water. Salt with no sweet hereafter. Rush of current now and then A small little push But the retreating flow Pulls the push back to naught. My mind is set, my heart is fixed Weary, dreary, wasted time The end, or the middle, no way to be sure I only want my moment of sublime Voices deep with dissent, disinterest and doubt Dashing hope with dream on the rocks of confidence. Swirled, tossed and tumbled, I land on my back. Wet sand sinks beneath me, sucking pulling me down. I've arrived all at once to the place that I sought My time, all my effort was not in vain wrought But the air here is cold, and alone and its dark. So back to the water, in search of the shore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of France Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Nice =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of France Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 EDIT: if this were facebook I'd "like" that poem, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandolfication Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 Like it. Several lines resonated with me and made me smile. Thanks for sharing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandolfication Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 I'd be interested to hear any reaction you have to Inception: An Ex-Christian Love Story I posted just a while ago on this forum. Thanks...and be gentle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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