Legion Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 I once was a child who was free of calluses and cognitive defense. Surely I once saw the world as it is. But now I have parsed and armored. Now I have healed from wounds. And my innocence has been tainted as thought of wrath has been born. I wish I could cleanse my perception and once again see the world as it is. I wish I could pierce my self illusion and know the world again as whole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RankStranger Posted June 24, 2011 Share Posted June 24, 2011 I know it's because I just got done reading that Yakuza thread. But I read the title as "discernment's troll". 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Margee Posted June 24, 2011 Moderator Share Posted June 24, 2011 Love it! did you write that legion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legion Posted June 24, 2011 Author Share Posted June 24, 2011 ... I read the title as "discernment's troll". That's easily done. I first named it "The Price of Discernment", but it wasn't quite right. Love it! did you write that legion? I'm glad you liked it Margee. Thanks. Yeah I wrote it. I tend to be my own worse critic. It feels close, but a little short of art. Need more practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Margee Posted June 24, 2011 Moderator Share Posted June 24, 2011 ... I read the title as "discernment's troll". That's easily done. I first named it "The Price of Discernment", but it wasn't quite right. Love it! did you write that legion? I'm glad you liked it Margee. Thanks. Yeah I wrote it. I tend to be my own worse critic. It feels close, but a little short of art. Need more practice. Can I show you one I wrote about 2 years ago? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legion Posted June 24, 2011 Author Share Posted June 24, 2011 Can I show you one I wrote about 2 years ago? Please do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Margee Posted June 24, 2011 Moderator Share Posted June 24, 2011 Can I show you one I wrote about 2 years ago? Please do. thanks friend - I'll dig it out and post it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Margee Posted June 24, 2011 Moderator Share Posted June 24, 2011 ... I read the title as "discernment's troll". That's easily done. I first named it "The Price of Discernment", but it wasn't quite right. Love it! did you write that legion? I'm glad you liked it Margee. Thanks. Yeah I wrote it. I tend to be my own worse critic. It feels close, but a little short of art. Need more practice. Legion, were you in a fair bit of emotional pain when you wrote this - do you mind me asking? Was this you that you were writing about or just life in general? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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