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Another Song/poem I Wrote (No Idea How To Create A Melody)


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I'm not sure exactly why I decided to share it here, but I thought that maybe someone else other than me would like it. This song is extremely morbid and probably depressing, so read it at your own emotional risk.

 

Voice of Darkness

 

All of the talking heads

Told me that I was dead

And needed to be revived

Their lies were easy to believe

Because stress in my life

And events in my past that left me traumatized

Killed the human I used to be

 

I felt the darkness closing in

I was holding onto hope that up above

I had a father living in the sky

Who would illuminate my path with light

But faith only kept me blind…

 

The voice of Darkness

Is calling out my name

It says not to be afraid

This most certainly is not a game

The dark abyss is where you belong

 

The demon living in me

Grew in strength with each day

All of the terrible things it made me say

Frightened everyone away

 

Religion was supposed to be the cure

It was supposed to eliminate my demon

Instead it brought out the worst in me

I became consumed by bigotry

My faith only added fuel to the fire in my soul

 

The voice of Darkness

Is calling out my name

It says not to be afraid

This most certainly is not a game

The dark abyss is where you belong

 

Destruction and death made me grin

 I was trapped in a war I could not win

My evil thoughts were in control

Made me appear as though I had no soul

They made me curse and spread hate

Then weep later on

When deep within my soul

I was overcame with remorse

 

My demon grew like cancer

Religion only made it grow

The deadly cells spread

Ringing alarm bells inside my head

Filling me with dread

 

The voice of Darkness

Is calling out my name

It says not to be afraid

This most certainly is not a game

The dark abyss is where you belong

 

When I discovered my faith was leading me astray

Religion was stripped away

Tearing the demon off of me

Leaving pieces behind

And I hoped the demon would never find

Me ever again

But the cancer cells are growing back

The darkness is seeping through the cracks

And Darkness is calling out my name

 

The voice of Darkness

Is calling out my name

It says not to be afraid

This most certainly is not a game

THE DARK ABYSS IS WHERE YOU BELONG

 

Darkness is reaching

I don’t know if I can resist

I am growing weak and in need of rest

The shadows in the abyss

Appear so inviting to me

Darkness is calling out my name

It says not to be afraid

This most certainly is not a game

The dark abyss is where you belong

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I am a bit of a muso and reading these lyrics I hear them being rapped rather than sung. Not that I am usually into rap though so I can't help you with the style of rapping. The lyrics are really good. If you found backing music for them you would probably find the few places that need work to turn it into a great song! 

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Rapping isn't really something that I am interested in. In my opinion, it would sound better if these lyrics were sung by a vocalist with a frightening sounding voice and scary music would be perfect for it, in my opinion.

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Rapping isn't really something that I am interested in. In my opinion, it would sound better if these lyrics were sung by a vocalist with a frightening sounding voice and scary music would be perfect for it, in my opinion.

 

Yes, that could work. I think I can hear it; a song so freaky most couldn't listen to it with the lights out. :)

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Rapping isn't really something that I am interested in. In my opinion, it would sound better if these lyrics were sung by a vocalist with a frightening sounding voice and scary music would be perfect for it, in my opinion.

 

Yes, that could work. I think I can hear it; a song so freaky most couldn't listen to it with the lights out. smile.png

 

 

That would be awesome, but I have a huge small problem. I don't know how to play any instruments that I could create scary music with, I'm not a good vocalist, and I'm not a song writer for a band that plays scary music.

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