Deidre Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 A haiku I wrote earlier today: Blinded by Your Light Closer to Hell, than Heaven I found my way out. I love haikus. Feel free to share your own creations here if you wish. <3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greylight Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 a lifeless statue that the fearful world worships is all you are now 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 a lifeless statue that the fearful world worships is all you are now I LOVE this, excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greylight Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 a lifeless statue that the fearful world worships is all you are now I LOVE this, excellent! thanks a lot!i like writing...i haven't done haikus (or any poetry for that matter) in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Moderator TheRedneckProfessor Posted July 29, 2014 Super Moderator Share Posted July 29, 2014 I will not respond By writing another poem Not good at haikus. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overcame Faith Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Go up to the hill The one in Jerusalem No savior was there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 Nice to see everyone's contributions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 A haiku I wrote earlier today:Blinded by Your LightCloser to Hell, than HeavenI found my way out.I love haikus. Feel free to share your own creations here if you wish. <3Paradox, this is so good.So much to think from it.But it speaks for itself.That's my comment for now. How 'bout you post a poem, too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seven77 Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Five years standing still In the spirit cutting flesh away I bleed still yet today 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fweethawt Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 Nice to see everyone's contributions! You starting this haiku thread reminded me of one that a past member and I started in the Sex And Christianity section back in 2005. This link SHOULD work. Let me know if it doesn't. http://www.ex-christian.net/topic/1141-sexy-haiku/?hl=%2Bsexy+%2Bhaiku#.U9iZAozD9zk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Can't open the link. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Hi Human: No, I've never been in there. I look forward to your poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greylight Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 a lifeless statue that the fearful world worships is all you are now impressive, greylight. (nice to meet you.) and you spell "grey" the right way. thank you very much can't wait to see your poem good to meet you too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Replying in haiku format...I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Nice to see everyone's contributions! You starting this haiku thread reminded me of one that a past member and I started in the Sex And Christianity section back in 2005.This link SHOULD work. Let me know if it doesn't.http://www.ex-christian.net/topic/1141-sexy-haiku/?hl=%2Bsexy+%2Bhaiku#.U9iZAozD9zk "Sexy Haiku?" I just peeked at it. Lol Hmmmm Who knew haikus could be so sexy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seven77 Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 Series of Connected Haiku (From my personal collection titled: "Brainfuck Hermit Hemorrhage of Modern Cathartic Art for the Poetically Inclined") By seven77 Bondage overwhelming Fallen state of mind burning Cannot stop the madness Fighting fleeing death Panic rising within the chest Fleeting pulse flatlined Stark projections loom Overhead on beyond the womb Born to die, entombed Oh God, merciful killer Stabbing me in a b thriller Bathed in holy blood Awash in sin yet again Awakened to see the end Reveal to conceal it Dirty criminals, beggars, me Which is the worst of the three? Forgiven two, Hell for thee. Why oh why did I Give my life to be wise in his holy bloodshot eyes? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amateur Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 Sunday morning hymn sung from the heart to our god no one hears but us 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Moderator TheRedneckProfessor Posted July 30, 2014 Super Moderator Share Posted July 30, 2014 Love everlasting Ensured by guilt, fear, and hell Your heart is stone, god. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 I'm not worthy. These haikus are something special. I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I'm picky about haikus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Moderator TheRedneckProfessor Posted July 30, 2014 Super Moderator Share Posted July 30, 2014 You, through me, threw out My grace through faith through jesus. I am through with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 My mind is made upDon't try to pull me back inPffft, you had your chance. (oh, this one's not about god...it's about an ex asshole i dated) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overcame Faith Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 Once in a great while Something superb comes along One who might beguile When reading your word Nothing you said made much sense So I lost my Lord So be on with you Get out of my life great fraud The lore was not true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Once in a great while Something superb comes along One who might beguile When reading your word Nothing you said made much sense So I lost my Lord So be on with you Get out of my life great fraud The lore was not true I like this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seven77 Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 Series of Connected Haiku #2(From my personal collection titled: "Brainfuck Hermit Hemorrhage of Modern Cathartic Art for the Poetically Inclined")By seven77 Does He love us so Does His everlasting show Do I dare say no? Oh you young fool who Runs away from the light so bright You ain't nothin' but blight Coulda been great But you were filled with hate Now your spirit will disintegrate Won't see you standin' in front of those pearly gates It ain't too late, mate Bring him into your heart Don't you think it's time to start? Thinkin' 'bout your future Do you wanna sit here Callin' yourself a queer. You're so dear. Walk away from it all Into his lovin' arms, fall Quit fightin'. Bravado appalled. Kill your ego. Pray loud. Drown out all the sounds My sweet little child sleeps through it. Tight. All night. Embraced. Oh you devilish friend Enticed by invisible sins Take it all. Love, The Christ, Jesus. Refused. Panic button. Reject regret. I mess it all up. Forever Yours, The Dark Lord. HIM. Two paths joining ends. Forgive me. Acknowledge. Accept. The will to live within. Not strictly haiku 5-7-5 verses. Close though. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deidre Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 That's brilliant seven ^^ I enjoy your work very much. Please keep sharing. My shitty thrown together haiku...but it's fitting: Friday night is here Yes, it's my favorite day Mayhem to ensue I think Friday should be an atheist's Sabbath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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