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A haiku I wrote earlier today:

 

Blinded by Your Light

Closer to Hell, than Heaven

I found my way out.

 

I love haikus. Feel free to share your own creations here if you wish. <3

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a lifeless statue

that the fearful world worships

is all you are now

I LOVE this, excellent!

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a lifeless statue

that the fearful world worships

is all you are now

I LOVE this, excellent!

 

thanks a lot!i like writing...i haven't done haikus (or any poetry for that matter) in a while.

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A haiku I wrote earlier today:Blinded by Your LightCloser to Hell, than HeavenI found my way out.I love haikus. Feel free to share your own creations here if you wish. <3

Paradox, this is so good.So much to think from it.But it speaks for itself.That's my comment for now.

How 'bout you post a poem, too? :)

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Nice to see everyone's contributions! :)

You starting this haiku thread reminded me of one that a past member and I started in the Sex And Christianity section back in 2005.

 

This link SHOULD work. Let me know if it doesn't.

 

 

http://www.ex-christian.net/topic/1141-sexy-haiku/?hl=%2Bsexy+%2Bhaiku#.U9iZAozD9zk

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a lifeless statue

that the fearful world worships

is all you are now

impressive, greylight.

(nice to meet you.)

and you spell "grey" the right way. smile.png

 

 

thank you very much

can't wait to see your poem

good to meet you too

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Nice to see everyone's contributions! :)

You starting this haiku thread reminded me of one that a past member and I started in the Sex And Christianity section back in 2005.

This link SHOULD work. Let me know if it doesn't.http://www.ex-christian.net/topic/1141-sexy-haiku/?hl=%2Bsexy+%2Bhaiku#.U9iZAozD9zk

"Sexy Haiku?" I just peeked at it. Lol

Hmmmm

 

Who knew haikus could be so sexy? ;)

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Series of Connected Haiku

(From my personal collection titled: "Brainfuck Hermit Hemorrhage of Modern Cathartic Art for the Poetically Inclined")

By seven77

 

Bondage overwhelming

Fallen state of mind burning

Cannot stop the madness

 

Fighting fleeing death

Panic rising within the chest

Fleeting pulse flatlined

 

Stark projections loom

Overhead on beyond the womb

Born to die, entombed

 

Oh God, merciful killer

Stabbing me in a b thriller

Bathed in holy blood

 

Awash in sin yet again

Awakened to see the end

Reveal to conceal it

 

Dirty criminals, beggars, me

Which is the worst of the three?

Forgiven two, Hell for thee.

 

Why oh why did I

Give my life to be wise in

his holy bloodshot eyes?

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Sunday morning hymn

sung from the heart to our god

no one hears but us

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I'm not worthy. :D

These haikus are something special. I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it.

 

I'm picky about haikus. ;)

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My mind is made up
Don't try to pull me back in
Pffft, you had your chance.

 

(oh, this one's not about god...it's about an ex asshole i dated) :D

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Once in a great while

Something superb comes along

One who might beguile

 

When reading your word

Nothing you said made much sense

So I lost my Lord

 

So be on with you

Get out of my life great fraud

The lore was not true

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Once in a great while

Something superb comes along

One who might beguile

 

When reading your word

Nothing you said made much sense

So I lost my Lord

 

So be on with you

Get out of my life great fraud

The lore was not true

I like this one.

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Series of Connected Haiku #2
(From my personal collection titled: "Brainfuck Hermit Hemorrhage of Modern Cathartic Art for the Poetically Inclined")
By seven77

 

Does He love us so

Does His everlasting show

Do I dare say no?

 

Oh you young fool who

Runs away from the light so bright

You ain't nothin' but blight

 

Coulda been great

But you were filled with hate

Now your spirit will disintegrate

 

Won't see you standin'

in front of those pearly gates

It ain't too late, mate

 

Bring him into your heart

Don't you think it's time to start?

Thinkin' 'bout your future

 

Do you wanna sit here

Callin' yourself a queer. You're so dear.

Walk away from it all

 

Into his lovin' arms, fall

Quit fightin'. Bravado appalled.

Kill your ego. Pray loud.

 

Drown out all the sounds

My sweet little child sleeps through it.

Tight. All night. Embraced.

 

Oh you devilish friend

Enticed by invisible sins

Take it all. Love, The Christ, Jesus.

 

Refused. Panic button.

Reject regret. I mess it all up.

Forever Yours, The Dark Lord. HIM.

 

Two paths joining ends.

Forgive me. Acknowledge. Accept.

The will to live within.

 

Not strictly haiku 5-7-5 verses. Close though. :)

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That's brilliant seven ^^ I enjoy your work very much. smile.png Please keep sharing.

 

 

My shitty thrown together haiku...but it's fitting:

 

Friday night is here

Yes, it's my favorite day

Mayhem to ensue

 

 

I think Friday should be an atheist's Sabbath. wink.png

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