Guest Lufferheart Posted January 19, 2008 Share Posted January 19, 2008 I toss and turn, my mind aglow. Morbid thoughts of all above or below, My realm, my life, the plane of thought... At such an age, have I passed what's been tought, To myself, to others, how to live, Is this clarity really, truly a gift, Or a curse on the impressionable, mind of the kid incorrigible? Gods, demons, all rake at my brain. Split open they find thoughts rampant, insane, Turn away, upset or look on with morbid curiosity, Like watching a car-wreck, a true monstrosity. Seeing destruction, wars of words, Could a god let this be, The death of the world, And all within, dying, killing, Searching for something not at all fullfilling. Abandoning sleep, I sit up in my bed, Wearily my hands rub at my head. Drag myself away to the computer, the screen alight. I read what my peers have written tonight. I gasp. Again. It's all just so sad. More intelligent speech could be found in a want ad. I kick at the desk, and wince in pain. I have no one but myself to blame. Take a pill to numb the thoughts. And now, and again, I let my brain rot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MathGeek Posted January 19, 2008 Share Posted January 19, 2008 Damn good, reads like something I could write if I were mentally awakened. Very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereticzero Posted January 19, 2008 Share Posted January 19, 2008 Not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillian Posted January 20, 2008 Share Posted January 20, 2008 Excellent Luffer and that was off the cuff? WOW! BRAVO!! J. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lufferheart Posted January 21, 2008 Share Posted January 21, 2008 Thank you, everyone, for your lovely feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jchpiper Posted January 24, 2008 Share Posted January 24, 2008 Made my eyes moisten...nothing new there. I should own stock in Kleenex. When the lights come on, it sometimes hurts. yah... Enjoyed it Lufferheart...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sojourner Posted January 24, 2008 Share Posted January 24, 2008 very well done looking forward to seeing you write more Sojourner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExConfusedChristian Posted February 2, 2008 Share Posted February 2, 2008 Thanks for sharing That was great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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