Guest Valk0010 Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 I am writing this for the sake of it, it doesn't represent how I feel. --------------------- I crossed myself in my general malaise. I lied about how I feel. I gain victory in peacemeal but lose many wars. I am a complainer, should be, could of, not. I feel worse when I tell remind myself, its true. There is no such thing is understanding. Me. Me. Me. Its all about other people. I should pretend I don't have it so bad. Fuck feelings I guess its all about appearance. I give advice but can't seek a soul. Plastic bitch, I should be a dream. Its always about becoming what I can never be. Me bad apparently No rest for the weary, everyone complains You don't have it so bad, yet I die inside. Compassion fatigue compassion weary I am tired, worn thin. Fuck Feelings I guess its all about appearance. Fuck Feelings. Fuck Feelings. Fuck Feelings. Fuck Feelings. Fuck Feelings. Fuck Feelings. You don't have it so bad, there people who have it worse. But that doesn't say anything about Me. Me. Me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dichotomy Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 I really quite like it but the rhythm is a little off in places. I'd add one more fuck feelings... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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