Cerise Posted November 29, 2005 Share Posted November 29, 2005 The Next Wave I watched him build his castles on the shore And it’s sink or swim In the ocean again I guess they’ve never heard him clear his throat He can slay you with an Ave Maria or a bubblegum commercial (they say words can’t hurt you) If that’s true, he laughed, then why are you still hiding here? Got a faded sandal tan Running from the bounty man Girls, you know that boy can crush your sea shells Just as easily as the next wave It’s sink or sin In the ocean again And she rides out the waves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fweethawt Posted November 29, 2005 Share Posted November 29, 2005 I don't get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted November 29, 2005 Author Share Posted November 29, 2005 I don't get it. nothing to get. It's a tone poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fweethawt Posted November 29, 2005 Share Posted November 29, 2005 nothing to get. It's a tone poem. Oh, I see now! So, if I read it out loud, my tongue will become more lean and defined, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fortunehooks Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 cerise, i like that poem. it should be published, and believe me folks, i don't brown nose. i really like the material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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