Phoenix415 Posted January 8, 2016 Share Posted January 8, 2016 I left alone My first steps out were as awkward and clumsy as a child’s I left alone Nothing but the clothes on my back I left alone They begged me to stay I left alone Saying that I would burn if I walked away I left alone I could not stay, though I left alone Pretend to live a lie I left alone I looked back at them I left alone And I asked “Who will join me?” I left alone Nothing but the questions in my head I left alone. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator TrueFreedom Posted January 8, 2016 Moderator Share Posted January 8, 2016 I love this. Did you get any inspiration from Iron Maiden? The opening lyrics from Number of the beast where the first thing to pop into my head. "I left alone, my mind was blank, I needed time to thinkTo get the memories from my mindWhat did I see? Can I believe that what I sawThat night was real and not just fantasy?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amateur Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Very strong and brave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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